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Week 6 mini task
Name: Jessie and Victor
Date: September 18th, 2024
Topic Sentence: Jessie and i think technology is a tool to improve mental health, but not an
ultimate solution.
1. Who/what: People might use technology as a substitute for therapy.
2. Did or Will/what: People may use technology to treat their mental problems on their
own.
3. When: While seeking for professional help
Where: On the internet
Why: Because of social pressure and shaming on mental health problems, people
might feel afraid to be judged because of what people on the internet think and say.
How: The taboo about mental health could lead to its neglect.
Summary Sentence:
Technology could help us to seek professional help for mental problems, but it is not a
substitute for therapy, even though people might use it like that.
Based on your outline above, draft your body paragraph here...
Jessie and i think technology is a tool to improve mental health, but not an ultimate
solution. People might use technology as a substitute for therapy, in a try to improve their
mental health, this people may use technology to treat their mental problems on their own.
While seeking professional help on the internet. Because of social pressure and shaming
on mental health problems, people might feel afraid to be judged because of what people
on the internet think and say. In an ideal world, we would all feel free to attend to our
mental problems, but the taboo about mental health could lead to its neglect.